Ending #1
Ending #2
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Very original!
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Wonderful alliteration on a Haiku. I find that very hard to do.
Amazing how we see what others seem to be able to do that we can’t, and they’re seeing the same thing in reverse. I am super-impressed by want you did–to me, the alliteration pales by comparison! God bless!
I love the alliteration of the ‘f’ sound to mirror the fly. The first version is my preferred of the two! Fabulous xx
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I’d say the last one has more punch but they’re both good reads.
Thank you for reading/responding. Those last lines always do me in. Thanks for weighing in. I really appreciate your feedback! God bless you!
You’re more than welcome. Last times are always tricky.
I think I like the first ending most 🙂
Thank you for reading/commenting. It’s like we tell the students–don’t change your answers unless you’re sure they’re wrong. Your first instinct usually is correct…God bless!