Thanks for reading/commenting. I appreciate your calling attention to something awry…Hmmm. You’ve got me thinking. I’ve recounted and still get 5-7-5. Which line seems off count to you? Thanks again!
Watching someone rage can be very upsetting and frightening. And sometimes, the calm is long in coming even after the person leaves. Very well captured.
Thank you for taking time to read and to comment.I appreciate your affirmation…On some levels, sometimes calm never comes, don’t you think?..Like the tentative calm, anticipating the next storm…God bless you!
cbhanek 
strong emotions in these lines
Thank you so much for reading/responding. Am new to this; appreciate your feedback. God bless you!
you are quite welcome 😌
Please ignore my earlier comment.. Or delete it.. Here’s my comment for you.. I liked the way the emotions flow..
Just a not of caution: Have you exceeded syllables … ?
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Thanks for reading/commenting. I appreciate your calling attention to something awry…Hmmm. You’ve got me thinking. I’ve recounted and still get 5-7-5. Which line seems off count to you? Thanks again!
Watching someone rage can be very upsetting and frightening. And sometimes, the calm is long in coming even after the person leaves. Very well captured.
Thank you for taking time to read and to comment.I appreciate your affirmation…On some levels, sometimes calm never comes, don’t you think?..Like the tentative calm, anticipating the next storm…God bless you!
very strong emotions here… well expressed… 🙂
Thank you for reading/responding. I truly appreciate your affirming feedback. God bless you!
Such powerful imagery presented in powerfully succinct bites. Great job! This was very moving.
Thank you for reading/commenting. I appreciate your validation. God bless you!
You’re most welcome 🙂 God bless you too!
yes, the fright, the wait to see it pass leaving you unhurt…beautifully expressed….read mine here….http://istoppedtosmellarose.blogspot.com/2015/10/birth-of-storm.html
Thanks for reading/commenting. Did likewise on your site. Interesting how we both were thinking! God bless you!